Spangle Trailer

Hey just some quick comments for evan on the trailer cuz I just watched it again so I'll post while it's fresh. One very specific thing would be to make the beginning part faster before we see Justin say the thing about the business which gives us something to latch onto plotwise. And just cut as close as possible before and after relevant diologue like when (i forget his name I'm sorry) is talking on the phone, cut out the pause, we've got no room for dramatic pauses in life let alone a trailer. Make sense? I like those other shots before Justin's first appearance but maybe make them quicker and put them after there is some explanation. Please tell me what to do about my trailer because I've got to make a slightly longer and much better one. Mahalo!